Tuesday, 22 September 2015

Writing term 3

Wa production writing
22/9


Writing:
"Wow are we going now mum?" "Yep" she replied. I jumped in car, I was ready to take off! We picked up my dad from his work then we went straight to the regent. When I got there I saw Eva so I followed her. "I think I am going to be nervos " wispeered to myself. I could hear kids splashing in the puddles and some kids were screaming. When I was walking into the regent a bubble of Voices popped in my ear. My mind was telling me this is the night,I am must perform proudly and do my very best.

1 comment:

  1. wow Ava you sure are a great writer I bet I can't even write like you well done.But that is even better because it is about how you felt what you heard even what you think

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